The writing was good. I enjoyed the descriptions. I thought, "I'm all legs, like a bar stool" was a great line. The pace was good but I think the development of Patch came too late in the story. I would have liked to get to know Patch better. I wasn't sure why I wanted to like him other than he oozed sex and danger. Vee is an annoying, shallow teenage girl, but also a believable, well-written character that acts as a great contrast to the steady, predictable Nora.
One last thing.... I think this book would make a cool movie. Patch = Robert Pattinson. Nora = Kristen Stewart. Vee = Nikki Reed. Elliot = Taylor Lautner. Dabria = Rachelle Leferve
Jules = Jackson Rothbone. I'd love to see some of these scenes on the big screen. We could call it the "Twilight Saga Hush, Hush."